4 Dec 2012

Project 1: Peer comments

Jieyun Yang Vivien
 the packaging is very easy to use. it allowed children eat breakfast on their own. they don't need their parents to spread butter for them. i think it's great to holding the butter stick and spread butter. it more easier than using knife.
for the poster, you can use more image to instead of written text. it will more attractive.

Lily Nguyen
This packaging would be very useful for the new mums. good work on your design solution. your poster contains a lot of information to support your design, but it's hard to find a focus on your poster. there are too much information on it.
nice rendering and layout for your poster.


Ke Zhang
the sandwich packaging is a nice concept. because children aways cant finish their sandwich at once.   the graphic on packaging is very attractive to children, and because it is foldable,children can keep the sandwich in the box for next time.

Stella Ho
the graphic on your packaging is very interesting. i really like it. it allowed kids  making milk shake easily. it divided coco powder into small portion, so they will know how much they need to put.
i think the poster layout it great, you can use more brighter colours.
 
Yuliang Gu  
 i like this concept. but i am just wondered  as the shape of the spoon is hemisphere, how does it work if there is only few milk powder left in the container?
the poster is simple and clear. but i think you need more images to show how to use.

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